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When I think of you there is pain.
I know it is for the best.
That does not mean it does not hurt.
You said you loved me.
Did I love you?
Yes I think I did.
I still want to be with you.
I know I shouldn't,
but I do.
This is for the best.
I still see you in my dreams.
There is something I want.
Even more than to touch you.
I want our friendship to survive.
You were my friend first,
My lover second.
In my heart you will always be.
I got a text that simply said "I miss u." This popped in my head right before I got in the shower. Yeah I get inspired at strange times. This was not the first and will not be the last probably.

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Sarenha-Rayne Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Did you mean "mean" instead of meant?
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DavisJes Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah thanks
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damien-m Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
ugh, im going thru this right now, actually... sucks big time, but I know it's not the end of the world...
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DavisJes Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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damien-m Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
:hug: back. Thank you!
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Aven-Cloudchaser Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
): I know how that feels... Very good
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DavisJes Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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JericaWinters Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
It's very moving. :cry:
Good poem.
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DavisJes Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
I get inspired at strange times and most of the stuff I write is from life.
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wildkitty317 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
mreow....
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