CONTEST: A HERO.
What is a Hero? Show us in all the facets you want, using the art forms that you find more congenial.
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CommentsAwesome - you've finished it!
-- "They don't know what you're doing. Babe, it must be art" - U2 Soo wonderful!
-- Okay, rip it up and start again! Yuriko: What's the matter with you, Rika? Rika: I miss my brother... Yuriko: You know what? Rika: Eh?! Yuriko: We go to Ninako's house and watch some episodes of Star Trek TNG! Rika: Yeah! Wow! I love this! I really like Mars' and Neptune's!!! Excellent job!!!
Really love the effects of having all the senshi transform right next to each other, as the eye sees. I especially love Saturn's colours and how the circle is about to cut off Pluto.
Watch out for the bodies, though. Because you have drawn them panel-to-panel, even if they're not supposed to actually be next to each other, their heights look a bit weird. And the bodies themselves can look a bit chunky. -- FAQ #56: How can I get people to notice my art? Masaya haters DON'T click here! This is a really neat picture, but the body of Sailorvenus looks kind of scrunched and short compared to the other bodies, and not proportioned correctly (the legs are too short in relation to the torso). I was thinking you could explain her short stubby legs by saying that her legs are kind of bent backward so they only seem short, but it's still kind of jarring to look at. Still a great picture, though.
Whoooooooah. That's a really neat picture!
-- Tex: Caboose, get behind the rock, they can still see you! Caboose: I can't see them...they can't see me... Tex: Thats because your looking at the rock Caboose. Red vs. Blue Ooh that's pretty
i like how you have Saturn Poor Saturn... without a transformation sequence every episode Very nice!!!
------------------------------------- There are no such things as strangers!!! Only friends we haven't met yet!!! Me: Very nice! I think you truly captured the henshin look. My only suggestion would be to try and give the bodies more angelic like poses, the seem a bit stiff, while in the series the always seem very relaxed while transforming.
-- Just RENT... just a little bit. Yeah I know. Thanks for the advice but remeber these are also one panel scenes.
This piece could have been better but it could have also been worse. I am happy with it but I do not think it is one of my best pieces. -- Win a Moon keychain [link] $2 sketches $5 color ~PinkDarts ~SMFanFicManga ~senshilove =dapride My fanfiction account: [link] |
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