literature

First Kiss

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We stand in my room
There are four of us
We are in high school
My room still says little girl
Perscious Moments wallpaper
Pink Carpet
Pink Comforter
My room is slowly changing
Showing that I am slowly changing
Sun, moon and stars slowly over take my room
The four of us stand in a circle
Trying to understand what we can't
You bring out a dagger
You turn to Ash and began to speak
"It is better to rush upon this blade
than enter the circle with fear in your heart.
How do you enter?"
As the tip of the blade rest on her skin Ash replies
"With perfect love and perfect trust"
Then you two kiss on the cheek
Ash takes the dagger
She turns to Vic holding the dagger as you did
Ash ask Vic the same question you asked her
Vic replies as Ash replied
The two kiss on the cheek
Vic takes the dagger from Ash
She turns to me and holds the dagger the same
Again the same question is asked
Again the same answer is given
Vic and I kiss on the cheek
I take the dagger and turned to you
I repeat the word you first spoke
Your answer is the same as our
You and I are different
Instead of kissing each other's cheek
We look at each other in the eye
We kiss each full on the lips
The kiss only last a second
Next comes the cup
Soda
Too young for wine
A drop of blood from each present
We drink
We wish
We laugh
Unfortunately right when I drink
Soda comes out my noise
We laugh more
We thought we were witches
The four of us sisters forever
The kiss between us may have been brief
But the memory last
A poem about my first kiss with a girl.

Critique Wanted: Does it flow? What images do you see?
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